Rejection Tuesday
Sounds of Italy
gladiator echo in the Colosseum
ruts of chariot wheels in Pompeii
ancient rumble of carts hauling wares
operatic arias reverberate in Venice
gondolier chatter, tourist camera clicks
shopkeeper patter, rustle of money exchange
Latin chant rolls with the mists surrounding Assisi
slurp of gelato tongue tingle
shoe shuffle stumble on cobblestones
inner grazie for the life concerto
sigh - rejected as "where's the ebb and flow? " and "too many adjectives"
Oh well.
Categories:
rejection
0 komentar:
Posting Komentar